Are there any areas of the presentation you would like to give more detail on?
In the presentation I think I would want to give more detail on the target audience section as I think I didn't explain it that clearly and just outlined the small parts of it, and I think if I explained it more such as the ethnicity part of it, its likely that it would of made more sense or so. Also another area that I think could of had more detail would be the song and lyrics section, as I don't think I really talked about it much of how it links in with the music video idea, plus I think I could of spoken louder and a bit more clearer. Also during the presentation I think I could of maybe tried to use a bit more of media terminology, to help back up my points as well.
What did the audience identify as the strengths of your music video idea?
During the feedback part of it the audience didn't really identify any specific strengths of my music video, so I'm taking it as I don't need to improve anything on my actual idea for my music video.
What did your audience identify as areas for improvement?
As an area for improvement someone asked a question about how would I make the artist stand out, and at first I didn't really think it being that much of a deal, but after listening to their ideas on how the artist could stand out at 2:17 as it seems like it could make the music video more engaging to watch and when listening to the audience talk about the ideas of making the artist stand out, to me it sounded like a new fun way to approach the concept of the video. Also the audience raised a point due to the cast and the person I chose to be the camera man as I included the same person to be in both, which I didn't think about beforehand, as it would cause trouble when it comes to filming but now I suppose I might have to change the male for the cast, or as the in the feedback video the audience talks about combining two video ideas together which involves a blow up doll, so in the end there might not even need to be a male cast member as the doll would represent the male.
what changes will you make to your music video concept based on the feedback you received?
Based on the audiences feedback I have took it into consideration about making the artist stand out more by maybe combing two opposite themes together such as the audience said dressing the artist up in beach clothing and maybe have them in a setting where you wouldn't really see it such as shopping mall, forest etc. Also with the beach theme clothing they could also be holding a blowing up ball or a bucket and spade to make it seem even more ridiculous. Also as my music video concept is too do with an relationship,maybe one of the partners could be all dressed extravagantly while the other one is dressed in casual clothing. Also from the feedback that I received I gathered that the song that I chose would better fit another persons video concept,which I think is a good idea as the audience said that the song I chose has more of a humorous and energetic feeling and tone to it and that would go better with the blow up doll concept.
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